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Mistwraith
09-14-07, 06:57 AM 09-14-07
OK, here's more chapters! Since the other thread was labled My Untitled Story (chapters 1 and 2), I thought I would make another one that way people know that all of the chapters are here. I recently finished Chapter 5, so I'll post Chapters 1 - 5 here, and when I finish other chapters, I'll post them here too!

Chapter 1

I never did like being quiet. It seemed that boring times always came with the quiet. But if there was every a better time to be quiet, it was now.

I was nervouse, sweat was pouring down my face, and I just couldn't sit still, even though my life depended on it. Thankfully, the Orcs didn't notice. "Whose idea was it for me to become a ranger anyways?", I muttered to myself. Once again, I shifted to a more comfortable position, which didn't stay comfortable for very long. "If you don't hush up and keep still, you're going to get us both killed!", my teacher said. Even though I couldn't see them, I knew there was anger in his eyes.

You see, I was a Ranger's Apprentice. I was to small and gangly to be a knight, and I wasn't good (or interested) in any of the other jobs the castle had to offer. To tell you the truth, I really didn't want to be a Ranger either, but it was all there was left.

I remember the day my Father told me that I would be a ranger's apprentice. "But Father! I want to do something exciting, something that has adventure! Being a ranger is boring, no fun! Besides, have you seen Thorst? He scares everybody, I don't want to have to live with him, what will people think?" "It's time you stop worrying about what other people think and just be yourself, James. Being a ranger has exciting adventures of it's own. Just give it a try, you never know, you may really like it.

Well, considering I'm sitting in a bush, close to orcs who want to kill me, I'm still not liking it to much. "Get out your bow", Thorst whispered. I did as I was told, as quietly as I could. It obviosley wasn't quiet enough for Thorst though. "Remind me to teach you how to QUIETLY take out your bow when we get home", he told me. I said I'd make a mental note of it, then returned to nocking an arrow. "Remember, aim for the neck, where there's no armor." "I know, I know", I mumbled.

We had gone over how to shoot an arrow a little bit, but not a whole lot. I was just hoping that I could bring down one of the three orcs, and then Thorst could take care of the other two. "Ready, Thorst", I said. "OK, go!" Zing! The arrow hit the intended target. "Yes!", I shouted as loud as I could, happy that I had succeeded in something. Thorst growled at me and instantly I knew what I'd done. "Ooops", I said real quiet. The one remaining orc turned and looked at us. Faster than I could blink, Thorst had nocked an arrow and shot the orc. It lay dead at my feet. "C'mon", Thorst said in a gruff voice.

Chapter 2

James had to practically run to keep up with Thort's long strides. "I'm sorry, Thorst! It was an accident, it will never happen again, I promise. You know how hard it is for me to keep quiet. Please, Thorst, I'm sorry." Thorst had to smile, the kid certainly knows how to apologize, he thought. "
It's alright, I know you didn't mean to. I shouldn't have gotten so mad at you, so I'm sorry too. Ya know, I was just like you when I was your age. Boy, you should have seen my teacher when I would act up. She'd get this fire in her eyes..."
"She?!?!", James quickly interupted, "what are you talking about? I thought it was forbidden for girls to be rangers."
"It was, and is", Thorst replied. "Though there were a few that snuck into the organization, and they were some of the best rangers."
"Snuck into the organization? How in the world did they do that?"
"Well, the girls were smart enough to find us, so the Elders of the organization gladly took them in. The rule is, that once your apprenticed, you must stick with it. So by the time the King found out about it, it was to late."
"Wow, they must have been awfully brave!"
"Yes, yes, they sure were."
"Thorst?"
"Yes?"
"Do I still get to go home for the weekend?"
"Well....I guess, you deserve a break."
"Cool, thanks! You know, you're not as bad as everybody makes you out to be. If they would just give you a chance, I think they'd see that too!"
Thorst smiled and the two of them walked along in silence.


*~*


"You all ready to go?"
"Sure am!", James said excitedly. With all his training, James hadn't seen his faimly in over a month. He couldn't wait to tell his family all about the girl rangers. You know, maybe he was actually starting to like this.
"'K, let's go, I'll walkl you over there."


*~*


Ten minutes later James was bounding up the steps to his house. He was so glad to be inside the city walls again, but even more excited to see his family. He bounded up the steps, opened up the door and yelled, "Mother, Father, I'm home!!"
"Oh, great, the dweeb is back."
That's my older sister Carla. Girls are lucky, because they get to choose whether or not they want to work at the castle. "Hey!", I yelled as I took off after her. We were soon chasing each other around the yard. I was so busy in fact, that I almost didn't see Thorst walking towards home. "Thorst! Wait!", I yelled as I ran inside.
"Mom", I gasped, all out of breath. "Can Thorst please stay for dinner?"
"Sure, go run and ask him", my mother said.
"Thanks!"


*~*


"Mmmm, that was very good, Mrs. Davenport. Very good indeed!"
"Thank you, Thorst", my mother said. "Would you like more coffee?"
"Oh, no thank you. I really should be getting home before it gets to terribly dark. Have horses I must take care of."
"Bye, Thorst!", I said merrily.
"Bye, James."


*~*


"Time for bed", my mother called out to me. I was instantly jerked back into the real world, away from the adventures of my book. I love to stay up late reading.
"Yes, Mother", I said as I hopped into bed.
"G'night", my Mother and Father said at the same time. Then my Father added, "We're really glad you're home." As they walked out of the room, I quietly added, "so am I, so am I." I whispered a quick prayer, then fell fast asleep.

*~*

I reluctantly opened my eyes the next morning. I looked at the clock, and when I saw what time it was I was wide awake. Oh no!, I thought, Thorst is gonna kill me! Wait a minute. Oh ya, I'm home for the weekend! No wonder I smell oatmeal. "Good morning sleepy-head!", my sister said as I stumbled out of bed.
"Uuuugh... G'mornin'", I finally worked out.
"You hungry?", Mother asked me?
"Very!"
"'K, sit down at the table and I'll get you some oatmeal and milk."
"Thanks."


*~*


By the time I finished eating I was wide awake again, this was much better than the hard tack I always ate with Thorst. Thorst, I wondered what he was doing. I found that I couldn't keep my mind off him. This weekend was gonna be longer than I though.


*~*


Thorst was having a battle with himself. One side of him really wanted to go get James and bring him back, he was starting to not like the quiet very much either. On the other hand, he felt like James needed a break from all his training. He had been picking things up very quickly. Before he could decide what to do, a rider clad in green came riding up, and hastily explained himself to Thorst. Guess that answers that question, Thorst thought glumly.


*~*


"Hey Mother, do you think I could talk to you for just a minute?"
"Sure, what's up?"
"Well, it's about Thorst." James was having to chase his mother around the kitchen. "I miss being with him and causing trouble, I'm missing my training too, I guess I'm really starting to like it, though it hasn't been to adventurous yet. What should I do?" At this, Mrs. Davenport stopped. James liking his training? Now that was certainly a change in attitude.
"Well James, I think you should go back. There's no point for you to mope around because you're in a bad mood."
"Thanks, Mother!"


*~*


A few minutes later James was on his way to Thorst's house. "James!", his Mother called out, "Don't casue to much trouble for Thorst!" James pretended not to hear, making mischief was so much fun with Thorst. He could finally see Thorst's house, at the sight of it, he broke into a run. When he got to the house, he expected to see Thorst sitting on the porch, but he wasn't there. James decided to check inside the house. Thorst wasn't there either, but there was a not, it looked like it had been written in a hurry.


James,
I will be gone for the rest of the week.
There is an emergency meeting with the Elders of the organization.
Practice your archery and knife throwing.
Don't forget to take care of your horse, Acer.

Thorst


James' mind raced, what was going on?


Chapter 3

James didn't know what to do. Should he go back home and tell his parents, or just stay here? After several minutes of sitting in his thinking spot in the barn, he finally decided to just stay put. It's what Thorst would do, he kept telling himself.

Thorst didn't keep very much in the kitchen, and James was a terrible cook, so it really wouldn't have mattered anyway. Since it was nearing lunchtime, James deiced to eat. "Guess I'll just have to go back to the plain boring hard tack", he said aloud to himself.
"If you keep talking to yourself people are gonna think you crazy", a little voice said.
Upon hearing this, James nearly jumped three feet in the air. "What in the world?!? Whose there?", he said in a shaky voice.
"Just me", the little voice said again. "The names Taiga."
James looked around.
"Would ya hurry up and look down here!"
James slowly looked down, and sure enough, he found the sopurce of the little voice. It came from a rabbit, no bigger than a small baby.
"Huh? How can you talk? And how can I hear you?"
"That's not important right now", Taiga said. "What's important is that I get you to the meeting place of the Organization quickly, Thorst says it's urgent."
"What are you talking about?"
"Just come on, I'll explain everything on the way."


*~*

After only a few minutes of packing, the two strange companions were off, one riding a horse, and the other hopping along beside.
"So will you please tell me what's going on, Taiga? I'm very confused."
"Of course. There are only a few rangers that can hear us animals. You and Thorst are two of them. Besides you two, there's only one more, Thorst's teacher, Cera. Nobody really knows how this started, but it has proved beneficial to both humans, and the animals. Now if you'll just follow me, we're almost there."


*~*

Thorst and Cera were waiting outside when james and Taiga arrived.
"Thorst! What in the world is going on?"
"You mean Taiga didn't tell you?", Cera asked.
Until now, James hadn't noticed Cera standing there.
"He told me a little, but not a whole lot. It's all very confusing."
"Yes, I quite understand. Now, if you'll come with me, we'll get everything settled."
"Yes, ma'm", I said quietly.


*~*

"Stand up straight, chin up, and please don't forget your manners", Thorst whipsered to me.
"Thorst, just because I'm not your teacher anymore, doesn't mean I can't hear you", Cera said without turning around. I tried to stifle my laugh, but couldn't. It just came out louder. Cera even let out a little laugh. Thorst just slumped down and didn't talk for the rest of the trip. "Stand up straight", I reminded him, he just ignored me.


*~*

"Wow", I said when we finally got to the entrance of the meeting place.
"The dwarves carved it all", Cera explained.
"You mean we're underground? I knew we had been going downhill some, but I never imagined we'd end up underground. This is amazing!"
Cera chuckled and I blushed, I had probably sounded like a little kid. Thorst huffed. I think he was jealous that I was getting so much attening from Cera. I also think he likes her. I turned around and looked at Thorst, him and Taiga were talking. I wondered what they were talking about, There's a lot more going on here than they're telling me. "O.K.", Cera said, breaking me out of my thoughts. "When you go in, following me and Thorst, and sit down silently next to Thorst. Please don't say anything. Keep your thoughts to yourself until after we get out of the meeting." Thorst must have told her I didn't like being quiet, I thought.


*~*

We had to sit there a whole fifteen minutes before anybody arrived. It wasn't until twenty minutes after THAT did the meeting start. It was awfully hard to keep quiet that long, but I managed to do it, even with Taiga throwing questions at me. I think I tried extra hard to stay quiet this time, probably because I wanted Cera to se ehow good Thorst had been training me. I was so lost in my thoughts that I didn't even notice that Taiga was gone and that there were a few more animals in the room. there was a squirell, a wolf, and a hawk. I later found out that they were all here t help us.
"We are all gathered here today...", I jumped. Wow, that was a loud voice. "...to discuss a very urgent matter. The Rangers are facing extinction." I heard several people gasp. I just started at the speaker with wide eyes. I detected a look of sadness in the animal's eyes. King Philip is using parts of his army to scout the land and send messages, therefore we're not needed for that anymore. We're also getting less people to train. Oh, speaking of apprentaces, please welcome the newest member of the Organization, James. Thorst is training him." Until now I had been sitting there with a blank expression on my face, now I felt it go red with embarressment as every eye was on me. I was relieved when the guy started talking again. He talked for about another ten minutes about things I knew nothing about. I've got to do something, I thought. Surely they're not going to give up that easily, I know I'm certainly not.


*~*

When it was finally over, Cera, Thorst and I had dinner. There was hot vegetalbe soup that tasted so good. I ate 'till I couldn't take another bit, even if you had paid me to.
After dinner Thorst took me up to my room and told me to get a good night's rest because "tomorrow is going to be a very busy day." I had brought my book along and probably read longer than I ought to have. I just hoped Thorst wouldn't find out.



Chapter 4

The next two days held intense training by the Elders, and even some by Cera herself. I thought I was going to die it was so hard! The animals constantly had a dazed look and I no longer had fun conversations with Taiga. Thorst took care of Aeris for me, I was extremly grateful for that! He never found out about my staying up late reading, and if he had, I didn't know about it and he didn't say anything.

"Thorst?", I asked on the third morning.
"Hmmm?", he replied. I could tell he was deep in thought, but about what I did not know.
"How much longer?", I asked wearily. "I'm not sure I can keep doing this for much longer and survive at the same time!"
Thorst chuckled. "This is the last day, and then you and I will be going home."
"But what about the Rangers diminishing, are we just going to sit back and do nothing?"
"No, the Elders are talking the situation over with King Philip in the morning."
"Oh, OK." I was baffled, it seemed like they were taking things so lightly. I wondered why. Sure seemed like an urgent matter to me, but maybe things weren't as bad as they seemed. I tried to keep telling myself that, but it didn't help, I was as worried as ever.

The Elders pushed me even harder today. I think they were trying to get King Philip to notice me and see how much he could use me and other rangers. Didn't seem like much of a plan to me, but I was all out of ideas.

Thorst and I left early the next morning before anybody was awake, Cera wasn't even up yet and she's an esspecially early riser. I left her a note telling her goodbye and asking her to tell Taiga bye for me as well. I had grown to like the little fellow and I hoped we would see eachother again very soon.

I slept about half the way home on Aeris. I was sound asleep having a nice dream when Aeris woke me up. He sounded afraid. I looked around for Thorst, but he was no where to be seen. He sure does have a knack for disappearing at times where I need him most, I thought. aeris whinnied again, but this time it was louder. I climbed out of the saddle, told Aeris to stay put, and quickly nocked an arrow. Wow, I'm getting pretty good at that! I moved silently through the forest looking all around for anything that seemed out of the ordinary. Suddenly I saw something move out of the corner of my eye. I looked through the trees and there, right in front of me in a little clearing was a Troll! I saw Thorst tied upside down to a tree branch and wondered how they got him and why they didn't get me too. "Dear God", I whispered, "please help."

Mistwraith
09-14-07, 06:58 AM 09-14-07
And now, since with Chapter 5 included in that post it was 24,899 characters, and there can only be 20,000 characters per post, here it chapter 5!!!!!

AND NOW THE NEWEST, NEVER BEFORE SEEN, CHAPTER 5!!!!!!!

James didn't know what to do, but he did know that he had to think of something fast. Thorst was still hanging there, but the troll was now sniffing the air. "Has he found out I'm here?!?" James did the only thing he could think of. He nocked an arrow and shot it at the troll. Unfortunatly, he later realized that that is about the stupidest thing you could do. The troll spun around as fast as he could (which wasn't very fast due to his large size) and faced James, a smile on his face, despite the arrow sticking out of his head. James just stood there. There was nothing he could o now but wait to be snatched up in the giant hands of the troll. He glanced up at Thorst, he was now unconcious from hanging upside down for so long, and before he knew it, he was right up along beside him. "Thorst!", James whispered, hoping to wake him up. When he got a sharp look from the troll he decided it was time to be quiet. Luckily the troll was stupid enough to let James keep his weapons, so hopefully he could do something with those. Except until he got down, he could only use his sword because all of his arrows had fallen out of the quiver and were now lying on the ground underneath him. James looked over to where the troll was and noticed a huge pot of water sitting over a fire. No doubt we'll probably be going into that as soon as the water boils, James thought. Suddenly an arrow hit the troll in the neck. James looked in the direction it had come from and saw a figure in a dark robe. Quickly, James took out his sword and cut the rope. He landed with a loud "THUD!!" The troll, who was clearly confused, looked first at James who was lying on the ground, then at the person in the bushes. When James had recovered from his fall, he picked up his sword and charged toward the troll, slashing at his legs as he went past. Finally, the troll fell, and James cut off its head. "Very impresseive!", James heard somebody say. He had totally forgotten about the person in the bush. "Thank you for all your help just then", James said rushing towards Thorst. He carefully cut him down and laid him on his back. "It was no problem", the person said, coming over to where James was. the person took off its hood, and until now, James hadn't noticed that it was a girl, and that the girl was an elf. She knelt down and examined Thorst. Then she put her small hand on his forehead, closed her eyes and whispered something to quiet for James to hear. Soon, Thorst opened his eyes. "My name is Kya", she said. "Mines James, and this is Thorst." James suddenly thought that she looked very pretty.
"What did you do to Thorst to make him wake up?"
"I healed him."
"You mean with magic? I've always wanted to be able to do that. Thorst says that only a few people can though, you can't just say something, you have to have the gift of healing."
"Maybe you do have the gift, but you just haven't discovered it yet."
"Maybe."
"For now though we need to let Thorst rest, and you need to go get your horse, and then go find Thorst's horse."
"What about your horse?"
"I don't have one, I travel on foot."
"Oh, Ok."

As James went to get Aeris he thought about Kya. He thought it was a little odd for a girl as young as she looked to be traveling alone, esspecially on foot.

*~*

He was soon back to the campsite with Aeris and was off again to find Thorst's horse. "Jack?", James called. Thorst liked simple names, unlike James. He whistled softly, "Here boy! Come 'ere Jack!" Jack stepped out from behind a tree and James went to him. He stroked his neck and whispered a word into his ear so he could ride him back. Every ranger horse has a special word that you have to say befor eyou could ride it, helps to keep people from stealing them. Luckly, Thorst had told James Jack's word, otherwise things would have been very difficult for James right then.

*~*

"So where are you from, James?"
"Svaibard, in Finton", he replied.
"Oh, I see. I've never been there, my Father says it's really big. I'd like to visit someday, I think it would be fun, maybe you could show me around if I ever got a chance to go."
"Ya, maybe."
"It must be fun to be a Ranger, at least I think it would be."
"It's OK I guess." Is she every quiet?, James thought to himself. Seems like she's always talking! "Goodnight, Kya," James said, interrupting her. He didn't know what she had been talking about because he hadn't been listening, but he did know that he was awfully bored and very tired. "Oh, Ummm, Ok. I don't need much sleep so I'll keep an eye on Thorst and make sure he sleeps well. Goodnight!" By the time she was finished witha ll of this, james was already fast asleep, dreaming of colorful dragons, a castle in the sky, and a beautiful elf princess that lived there.

*~*

James didn't want his dream to end, but like all dreams, it had to. He was just about to kiss the princess, when Thorst woke him up. "C'mon, we're not to far from home, let's go."
"What about Kya, are we just going to leave here here?"
"Kya? Oh the girl. She'll have to come with us, maybe we can get her back to where she lives."
"Can she please see Svaibard first? She told me last night that she's been wanting to visit."
"I guess, maybe she can stay with your folks for awhile."
"I bet so." James didn't think Carla would appreciate him bringing somebody to stay with them.
"Kya, you ready?", James asked.
"Hmmm? Oh, no, I figured I would stay here a couple more hours, this spot is so peaceful. Then I was going to follow after you so I could see Svaibard."
"You mean you're not coming with us?"
"No, why would I?"
"We can't just leave you here unprotected, what if something happened?"
"I'm smart enough and know enough magic to take care of myself. This is exactly why I ran away from home, nobody thought I could do anything on my own, and I don't need any of it from you!", and with that, she stomped off. James just started blankly at the direction she had gone, not knowing what to do or say. "Well", Thorst said, clearing his throat, "that went well." "I guess." "Just let her be, I'm sure she will follow us when she feels like it." Thorst and James got on their horses and set off towards home. He turned around to see Kya sitting on a log starting at him. He told himself not to worry, that everything would be OK, but he wasn't so sure he believed that. The one time he had found a girl beautiful, truly beautiful, he went and blew it.
"Thorst?", he said, after he had mulled over what had happened several times in his head.
"Yes?"
"Have you ever liked a girl, I mean really and truly liked her?"
"Yes, why?"
"Just wondering." James thought Thorst would think he was silly for asking this next question, but he asked it anyways. "How did you get her to like you back?", James finally asked.
"Is this about Kya?"
"Well...yes, it is. She's really pretty, and if you look into eyes, there's so much knowledge, and I love the way they sparkle in the sunlight. I wonder where she's from."
"Ellsworth Forest to answer your last question, and yes, she is quite pretty. On your first question, just be nice. But you really should take your mind off of her, it will get in the way of your training, besides, your not old enough to worry about girls yet."
"Ok, I'll try I guess. Do you really think she'll follow us?"
"Yep, in fact, she is right now, but she's staying pretty much out of sight. I think she likes you too, even though she might not show it." When Thorst said that, James felt a surge of joy go through his body, that would be so cool!, he thought. He looked back one more time and he though he could make out two green eyes watching him, after that, he didn't see her again for awhile.

Mistwraith
09-14-07, 01:22 PM 09-14-07
ANNOUNCEMENT!!!!

Chapters 3 and 4 have been combined!!! Here is what it actually is:

Chapter 3

James didn't know what to do. Should he go back home and tell his parents, or just stay here? After several minutes of sitting in his thinking spot in the barn, he finally decided to just stay put. It's what Thorst would do, he kept telling himself.

Thorst didn't keep very much in the kitchen, and James was a terrible cook, so it really wouldn't have mattered anyway. Since it was nearing lunchtime, James deiced to eat. "Guess I'll just have to go back to the plain boring hard tack", he said aloud to himself.
"If you keep talking to yourself people are gonna think you crazy", a little voice said.
Upon hearing this, James nearly jumped three feet in the air. "What in the world?!? Whose there?", he said in a shaky voice.
"Just me", the little voice said again. "The names Taiga."
James looked around.
"Would ya hurry up and look down here!"
James slowly looked down, and sure enough, he found the sopurce of the little voice. It came from a rabbit, no bigger than a small baby.
"Huh? How can you talk? And how can I hear you?"
"That's not important right now", Taiga said. "What's important is that I get you to the meeting place of the Organization quickly, Thorst says it's urgent."
"What are you talking about?"
"Just come on, I'll explain everything on the way."


*~*

After only a few minutes of packing, the two strange companions were off, one riding a horse, and the other hopping along beside.
"So will you please tell me what's going on, Taiga? I'm very confused."
"Of course. There are only a few rangers that can hear us animals. You and Thorst are two of them. Besides you two, there's only one more, Thorst's teacher, Cera. Nobody really knows how this started, but it has proved beneficial to both humans, and the animals. Now if you'll just follow me, we're almost there."


*~*

Thorst and Cera were waiting outside when james and Taiga arrived.
"Thorst! What in the world is going on?"
"You mean Taiga didn't tell you?", Cera asked.
Until now, James hadn't noticed Cera standing there.
"He told me a little, but not a whole lot. It's all very confusing."
"Yes, I quite understand. Now, if you'll come with me, we'll get everything settled."
"Yes, ma'm", I said quietly.


*~*

"Stand up straight, chin up, and please don't forget your manners", Thorst whipsered to me.
"Thorst, just because I'm not your teacher anymore, doesn't mean I can't hear you", Cera said without turning around. I tried to stifle my laugh, but couldn't. It just came out louder. Cera even let out a little laugh. Thorst just slumped down and didn't talk for the rest of the trip. "Stand up straight", I reminded him, he just ignored me.


*~*

"Wow", I said when we finally got to the entrance of the meeting place.
"The dwarves carved it all", Cera explained.
"You mean we're underground? I knew we had been going downhill some, but I never imagined we'd end up underground. This is amazing!"
Cera chuckled and I blushed, I had probably sounded like a little kid. Thorst huffed. I think he was jealous that I was getting so much attening from Cera. I also think he likes her. I turned around and looked at Thorst, him and Taiga were talking. I wondered what they were talking about, There's a lot more going on here than they're telling me. "O.K.", Cera said, breaking me out of my thoughts. "When you go in, following me and Thorst, and sit down silently next to Thorst. Please don't say anything. Keep your thoughts to yourself until after we get out of the meeting." Thorst must have told her I didn't like being quiet, I thought.


*~*

We had to sit there a whole fifteen minutes before anybody arrived. It wasn't until twenty minutes after THAT did the meeting start. It was awfully hard to keep quiet that long, but I managed to do it, even with Taiga throwing questions at me. I think I tried extra hard to stay quiet this time, probably because I wanted Cera to se ehow good Thorst had been training me. I was so lost in my thoughts that I didn't even notice that Taiga was gone and that there were a few more animals in the room. there was a squirell, a wolf, and a hawk. I later found out that they were all here t help us.
"We are all gathered here today...", I jumped. Wow, that was a loud voice. "...to discuss a very urgent matter. The Rangers are facing extinction." I heard several people gasp. I just started at the speaker with wide eyes. I detected a look of sadness in the animal's eyes. King Philip is using parts of his army to scout the land and send messages, therefore we're not needed for that anymore. We're also getting less people to train. Oh, speaking of apprentaces, please welcome the newest member of the Organization, James. Thorst is training him." Until now I had been sitting there with a blank expression on my face, now I felt it go red with embarressment as every eye was on me. I was relieved when the guy started talking again. He talked for about another ten minutes about things I knew nothing about. I've got to do something, I thought. Surely they're not going to give up that easily, I know I'm certainly not.


*~*

When it was finally over, Cera, Thorst and I had dinner. There was hot vegetalbe soup that tasted so good. I ate 'till I couldn't take another bit, even if you had paid me to.
After dinner Thorst took me up to my room and told me to get a good night's rest because "tomorrow is going to be a very busy day." I had brought my book along and probably read longer than I ought to have. I just hoped Thorst wouldn't find out.

*~*

The next two days held intense training by the Elders, and even some by Cera herself. I thought I was going to die it was so hard! The animals constantly had a dazed look and I no longer had fun conversations with Taiga. Thorst took care of Aeris for me, I was extremly grateful for that! He never found out about my staying up late reading, and if he had, I didn't know about it and he didn't say anything.

"Thorst?", I asked on the third morning.
"Hmmm?", he replied. I could tell he was deep in thought, but about what I did not know.
"How much longer?", I asked wearily. "I'm not sure I can keep doing this for much longer and survive at the same time!"
Thorst chuckled. "This is the last day, and then you and I will be going home."
"But what about the Rangers diminishing, are we just going to sit back and do nothing?"
"No, the Elders are talking the situation over with King Philip in the morning."
"Oh, OK." I was baffled, it seemed like they were taking things so lightly. I wondered why. Sure seemed like an urgent matter to me, but maybe things weren't as bad as they seemed. I tried to keep telling myself that, but it didn't help, I was as worried as ever.

The Elders pushed me even harder today. I think they were trying to get King Philip to notice me and see how much he could use me and other rangers. Didn't seem like much of a plan to me, but I was all out of ideas.

Thorst and I left early the next morning before anybody was awake, Cera wasn't even up yet and she's an esspecially early riser. I left her a note telling her goodbye and asking her to tell Taiga bye for me as well. I had grown to like the little fellow and I hoped we would see eachother again very soon.

I slept about half the way home on Aeris. I was sound asleep having a nice dream when Aeris woke me up. He sounded afraid. I looked around for Thorst, but he was no where to be seen. He sure does have a knack for disappearing at times where I need him most, I thought. aeris whinnied again, but this time it was louder. I climbed out of the saddle, told Aeris to stay put, and quickly nocked an arrow. Wow, I'm getting pretty good at that! I moved silently through the forest looking all around for anything that seemed out of the ordinary. Suddenly I saw something move out of the corner of my eye. I looked through the trees and there, right in front of me in a little clearing was a Troll! I saw Thorst tied upside down to a tree branch and wondered how they got him and why they didn't get me too. "Dear God", I whispered, "please help."



And then Chapter 5 is actually Chapter 4!

Chapter 4

James didn't know what to do, but he did know that he had to think of something fast. Thorst was still hanging there, but the troll was now sniffing the air. "Has he found out I'm here?!?" James did the only thing he could think of. He nocked an arrow and shot it at the troll. Unfortunatly, he later realized that that is about the stupidest thing you could do. The troll spun around as fast as he could (which wasn't very fast due to his large size) and faced James, a smile on his face, despite the arrow sticking out of his head. James just stood there. There was nothing he could o now but wait to be snatched up in the giant hands of the troll. He glanced up at Thorst, he was now unconcious from hanging upside down for so long, and before he knew it, he was right up along beside him. "Thorst!", James whispered, hoping to wake him up. When he got a sharp look from the troll he decided it was time to be quiet. Luckily the troll was stupid enough to let James keep his weapons, so hopefully he could do something with those. Except until he got down, he could only use his sword because all of his arrows had fallen out of the quiver and were now lying on the ground underneath him. James looked over to where the troll was and noticed a huge pot of water sitting over a fire. No doubt we'll probably be going into that as soon as the water boils, James thought. Suddenly an arrow hit the troll in the neck. James looked in the direction it had come from and saw a figure in a dark robe. Quickly, James took out his sword and cut the rope. He landed with a loud "THUD!!" The troll, who was clearly confused, looked first at James who was lying on the ground, then at the person in the bushes. When James had recovered from his fall, he picked up his sword and charged toward the troll, slashing at his legs as he went past. Finally, the troll fell, and James cut off its head. "Very impresseive!", James heard somebody say. He had totally forgotten about the person in the bush. "Thank you for all your help just then", James said rushing towards Thorst. He carefully cut him down and laid him on his back. "It was no problem", the person said, coming over to where James was. the person took off its hood, and until now, James hadn't noticed that it was a girl, and that the girl was an elf. She knelt down and examined Thorst. Then she put her small hand on his forehead, closed her eyes and whispered something to quiet for James to hear. Soon, Thorst opened his eyes. "My name is Kya", she said. "Mines James, and this is Thorst." James suddenly thought that she looked very pretty.
"What did you do to Thorst to make him wake up?"
"I healed him."
"You mean with magic? I've always wanted to be able to do that. Thorst says that only a few people can though, you can't just say something, you have to have the gift of healing."
"Maybe you do have the gift, but you just haven't discovered it yet."
"Maybe."
"For now though we need to let Thorst rest, and you need to go get your horse, and then go find Thorst's horse."
"What about your horse?"
"I don't have one, I travel on foot."
"Oh, Ok."

As James went to get Aeris he thought about Kya. He thought it was a little odd for a girl as young as she looked to be traveling alone, esspecially on foot.


*~*

He was soon back to the campsite with Aeris and was off again to find Thorst's horse. "Jack?", James called. Thorst liked simple names, unlike James. He whistled softly, "Here boy! Come 'ere Jack!" Jack stepped out from behind a tree and James went to him. He stroked his neck and whispered a word into his ear so he could ride him back. Every ranger horse has a special word that you have to say befor eyou could ride it, helps to keep people from stealing them. Luckly, Thorst had told James Jack's word, otherwise things would have been very difficult for James right then.


*~*

"So where are you from, James?"
"Svaibard, in Finton", he replied.
"Oh, I see. I've never been there, my Father says it's really big. I'd like to visit someday, I think it would be fun, maybe you could show me around if I ever got a chance to go."
"Ya, maybe."
"It must be fun to be a Ranger, at least I think it would be."
"It's OK I guess." Is she every quiet?, James thought to himself. Seems like she's always talking! "Goodnight, Kya," James said, interrupting her. He didn't know what she had been talking about because he hadn't been listening, but he did know that he was awfully bored and very tired. "Oh, Ummm, Ok. I don't need much sleep so I'll keep an eye on Thorst and make sure he sleeps well. Goodnight!" By the time she was finished witha ll of this, james was already fast asleep, dreaming of colorful dragons, a castle in the sky, and a beautiful elf princess that lived there.


*~*

James didn't want his dream to end, but like all dreams, it had to. He was just about to kiss the princess, when Thorst woke him up. "C'mon, we're not to far from home, let's go."
"What about Kya, are we just going to leave here here?"
"Kya? Oh the girl. She'll have to come with us, maybe we can get her back to where she lives."
"Can she please see Svaibard first? She told me last night that she's been wanting to visit."
"I guess, maybe she can stay with your folks for awhile."
"I bet so." James didn't think Carla would appreciate him bringing somebody to stay with them.
"Kya, you ready?", James asked.
"Hmmm? Oh, no, I figured I would stay here a couple more hours, this spot is so peaceful. Then I was going to follow after you so I could see Svaibard."
"You mean you're not coming with us?"
"No, why would I?"
"We can't just leave you here unprotected, what if something happened?"
"I'm smart enough and know enough magic to take care of myself. This is exactly why I ran away from home, nobody thought I could do anything on my own, and I don't need any of it from you!", and with that, she stomped off. James just started blankly at the direction she had gone, not knowing what to do or say. "Well", Thorst said, clearing his throat, "that went well." "I guess." "Just let her be, I'm sure she will follow us when she feels like it." Thorst and James got on their horses and set off towards home. He turned around to see Kya sitting on a log starting at him. He told himself not to worry, that everything would be OK, but he wasn't so sure he believed that. The one time he had found a girl beautiful, truly beautiful, he went and blew it.
"Thorst?", he said, after he had mulled over what had happened several times in his head.
"Yes?"
"Have you ever liked a girl, I mean really and truly liked her?"
"Yes, why?"
"Just wondering." James thought Thorst would think he was silly for asking this next question, but he asked it anyways. "How did you get her to like you back?", James finally asked.
"Is this about Kya?"
"Well...yes, it is. She's really pretty, and if you look into eyes, there's so much knowledge, and I love the way they sparkle in the sunlight. I wonder where she's from."
"Ellsworth Forest to answer your last question, and yes, she is quite pretty. On your first question, just be nice. But you really should take your mind off of her, it will get in the way of your training, besides, your not old enough to worry about girls yet."
"Ok, I'll try I guess. Do you really think she'll follow us?"
"Yep, in fact, she is right now, but she's staying pretty much out of sight. I think she likes you too, even though she might not show it." When Thorst said that, James felt a surge of joy go through his body, that would be so cool!, he thought. He looked back one more time and he though he could make out two green eyes watching him, after that, he didn't see her again for awhile.

DragonSpirit
09-14-07, 01:45 PM 09-14-07
Great job!! Love it!! Eeee!! heh.

Mistwraith
09-14-07, 01:47 PM 09-14-07
Thank you!



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